Thursday, April 17, 2014

lemon blossom & lavender


my alabaster box is broken
my hair perfumed
i am the weeping woman, child
lost & found

i am like stardust
hammocked
in the web of the moon, dreamer
asleep in the blue-flame rain, cloud and fog
delivered on the dark-smoke water
eyelids stirring
in dappled light
opening to the full
s     t     r     e     t     c     h
in the sweet summer sun
when everything is new again,
believing

i am my best work
in my pajamas, cuddling
my preferred method
of communication

i am a seeker of poison
to extract from wounds,
salve when storm-blistered,
and hope when there is
nothing else

i am consumed
in crimson smolder passion
and peaceful glow, soft & bold

my alabaster box is broken
my hair perfumed
i am the weeping woman, child
lost & found



© 2014 Jennifer Wagner



photo © 2014 jennifer wagner

















For dVerse Meeting the Bar:  Self Portraits.  Brian has challenged us to write a "selfie" poem which can be "symbolic, metaphorical, descriptive".

27 comments:

  1. stardust hammocked on the web of the moon....
    seeker of poison to extract from wounds...
    really some cool lines in this jennifer...
    the repetition of the opening stanza at the end
    is spot on too...

    cool shot of you as well...looking fly in the glasses
    and the way you did your hair...

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  2. I'm curious about the path behind you...

    Nice pen. Cool pic :) ~

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  3. I love your photo and so many great lines! I too am storm blistered~ You are stardust-how beautiful! I want to tangle with that web of a moon! Beautiful, Jennifer!

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  4. beautiful. my favourite bit: stardust
    hammocked
    in the web of the moon

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  5. I felt the hurt, and the strength in this poem - your words just carried me along

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  6. i love how you start and end this with the broken alabaster box, the perfumed hair...lost and found... very cool pic as well with the path reflecting in your eyes..

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  7. Creative title and very cool on the opening and ending lines - weeping woman, child lost & found ~

    I find that whole second stanza just fabulous - i am like stardust
    hammocked
    in the web of the moon, dreamer
    asleep in the blue-flame rain, cloud and fog

    Love that shot of you too, smiles ~

    Grace

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  8. seeker of poison to extract from wounds....i love and revere the image...great
    lines all along...

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  9. I see you. Well done.

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  10. so loved the hammock in the moon... wonderful visuals

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  11. Many, many years ago I wrote an allegory using the alabaster box. Such a wonderful use here, Jennifer. You've created such good imagery.

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  12. hammocked in the web of the moon...
    I got stuck on that line (in a good way) and the contrast between crimson passion and the soft and bold glow.

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  13. Absolutely fantastic.....I noted the same lines as Brian, love the repetition of the key lines....and, especially, "hope when there is nothing else." Me, too, kiddo. Especially then!

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  14. This is a lovely ride of indulgence with delicious stops along the way.

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  15. A full spectrum of reflection, poetic but not conceit, self-deprecating while still
    self-supporting; shreds & shadows of self-love prep for the dispensation to others; a very nice poetic.

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  16. Gorgeous... this made me feel like we could be best friends, sitting in the backyard watching fireflies go by.

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  17. Wonderful...and great photo too. I can so relate to this. My favorite bit of wording: my alabaster box is broken.

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  18. "The child lost & found."
    __By stepping back to find the child we once were, we find ourselves.

    the child
    tells me what I should be
    I strive

    Best wishes! _m

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  19. “eyelids stirring
    in dappled light
    opening to the full
    s t r e t c h
    in the sweet summer sun
    when everything is new again,
    believing”

    – wonderful words: an indelible line of poetry.

    Great picture, too!

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  20. Love the poem and your picture :)

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  21. Very interesting piece - as a whole it touches many sensitive aspects as well. Smiles.

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  22. Love the repeat of the first and final stanza - gives it a different meaning from first to last - beautiful self portrait wonderfully crafted - K

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  23. Very revealing of the thoughtful you ...like the pajamas part ;)

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Thank you for your thoughts!