Sunday, December 15, 2013

Sky's Advent (a Fibonacci poem)



Stars
fill
and spill
the black orchid
night streaked silken with shimmering,
all flickering in remembrance of one so small.


© 2013 Jennifer Wagner


29 comments:

  1. Very beautiful, Jennifer. It feels holy.

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  2. nice...i like the night as the black orchid...
    beautiful visuals in this....
    and wonderful last line too...smiles.

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  3. i love the images...esp. the stars spilling as it underlines the wonderful abundance of creation.. so beautifully penned

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  4. Oh what a wonderful poem.. black orchids.. and yet so small... very nice form as well

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  5. vivid imagery! to say that so much conjures up our existence and how much do we owe to them. Merry Christmas and happy New year

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  6. all flickering in remembrance
    of one so small.

    It gives a nice feeling that one is remembered to be blessed always. Nicely Jennifer!

    Hank

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  7. moments that touch our hearts,.... nice.

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  8. Beautiful imagery ... night as a black orchid filled with shimmering stars ... perfect for advent. Love this :)

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  9. What a lovely fib poem ~ Black orchid night, the remembrance of one so small ~

    Wishing you Happy Holidays ~

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  10. Absolutely loved this one Jennifer. What a great image "black orchid night is".
    Wonderful!

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  11. ...centered on the orchid, a great image here

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  12. So few words, yet such expression

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  13. Hi Jennifer, this si sparkling - technically very beautifully written... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  14. What a beautiful capturing of the essence of night.

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  15. Lovely - and technically perfect. I wish I could do this type of piece.

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  16. so small
    and larger than life itself

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  17. Very nice, seems to swirl and open, then close up again on that last word. Excellent title as well.

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  18. This was sooo gorgeous! Succinct and beautiful.

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  19. They do flicker to keep the spiritual being company! Nicely Jennifer!

    Hank

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