Saturday, September 20, 2025

Pick 'Em Up Truck

 

On the door

was the logo of my dad’s company:

Automotive Electric.

 

It was maroon,

and we could sit

four across in the cab,

even in our puffy winter coats

with faux fur-lined trim

and Moon Boots,

while sliding around

on the slush-filled

streets of Spokane.

 

In summer,

I’d lay canopied in the back

during long drives—

comics, coloring books, and Judy Blume’s spread out.

 

Once, on the way to the drive-in

I sat in back in a lawn chair

(it’s as redneck as it sounds)

and slid across the bed

when we nearly wrecked,

Mom fretting my injuries

through the connecting window,

Dad smoothing and “soothing” with a growl.

 

I wish I had it now,

to kick the tires

like my dad always did,

 

to pop a sleeping bag in the back

for the drive-in,

wearing my pajamas

like people do on airplanes now,

and to feel that Automotive Electric fly

just one more time.

 

 

© 2025 Jennifer Wagner

 

Through the Windshield

 

8 comments:

  1. This tells the most wonderful story. I look back at those no seat belt days and am amazed at how resilient we all were. Smiles. I love the visual details! Loved this!

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  2. I love every bit of this poem, for the memory, how it's told, and how nostalgia plays its part!

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  3. I take it that you have no dad now, as I lost mine and Mom too. I still have that feeling of "I've always had a mom and not I have none." Just a strange feeling of what? Aloneness? , Well, missing her the most and things we could write tales like you did.
    BYW I did write of one experience of riding to Missouri to get some fence post in a 1934 Chevy putlling a trailer.
    Come read.
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    1. p.s, Jennifer, welcome to writing, I like the bunch and I think you will too.

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    2. Hi Jim, no, my dad is still here. I can understand that alone feeling you must feel, though, and you have my sympathies. And thank you for your warm welcome--I've been around for a while--writing and posting with the very nice bunch I believe you are referring to. :-)

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  4. I enjoyed this, Jennifer. Believe it or not, my dad had an auto repair business called A****** Auto Electric, so I really sat up when I heard you mention the name of your dad's company. In contrast, my dad's 'company vehicle' was a white pick-up truck which I woud sometimes (dangeroiusly) ride in back of, untethered. I loved all of the details your poem mentioned, perhaps partly because it triggered some of my childhood memories. I enjoyed reading that on long drives you would be canopied in the back reading....I too would read on long trips, but not as excitingly - in the back seat (no seatbelts of a sedan!

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  5. I so enjoyed the rich memories created once in life. How beautifully you've described every detail, Jennifer! "just one more time." This line tugs at the heartstrings.

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  6. Such a wonderful, nostalgic piece. Tinged with the innocence of childhood and better times in the past... I enjoyed reading your poem very much, Jennifer.

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Thank you for your thoughts!