tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post9127187612010497511..comments2024-03-14T18:03:00.898-07:00Comments on Poet Laundry: The Carbon Dioxide (of Poetry)Jennifer Wagnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-3639222024132896722013-04-15T13:29:10.619-07:002013-04-15T13:29:10.619-07:00I love how descriptive this is especially,
branch...I love how descriptive this is especially, <br />branch of life’s undoing<br />rotted right up through your soles,<br /><br />great linesaka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-80323997855950456202013-04-14T21:43:15.867-07:002013-04-14T21:43:15.867-07:00Couldn't have been a better tribute..absolutel...Couldn't have been a better tribute..absolutely magical...making the words breathe is all what is poetry about..Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-63561811808615228782013-04-14T15:38:52.712-07:002013-04-14T15:38:52.712-07:00Wow Jennifer, what an amazing set of words--grit o...Wow Jennifer, what an amazing set of words--grit of unholy floors; find grace in time-smudged glass--a wonderful poem. Read it through a few times just to savor it :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-14225570903634777372013-04-14T07:15:07.701-07:002013-04-14T07:15:07.701-07:00Looking forward to your next wonderful poem :)Looking forward to your next wonderful poem :)Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-15292705840975601092013-04-11T19:09:16.932-07:002013-04-11T19:09:16.932-07:00" and waiting for you
to breathe them into bi..." and waiting for you<br />to breathe them into birth"<br /><br />I love how you can birth such wonderful work from memories, words or pieces of life that you come across. Keep it up, you're amazingly talented!<br />Tankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10268689309747055641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-71088541663445306712013-04-11T10:18:34.127-07:002013-04-11T10:18:34.127-07:00yes, you have turned pain into art. Quite wondrou...yes, you have turned pain into art. Quite wondrously, in fact. I won't bother to hight light the WHOLE poem ;) It's when I read exquisite poetry like this I just want to drop my pen and give up.... sigh.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-88898430960548753032013-04-11T06:50:45.778-07:002013-04-11T06:50:45.778-07:00I just have to say...you are the queen of amazing ...I just have to say...you are the queen of amazing metaphors. You truly have a gift my friend. Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-15556920055090802712013-04-11T05:59:01.396-07:002013-04-11T05:59:01.396-07:00beautiful lines, and sentiment. as a kind of scien...beautiful lines, and sentiment. as a kind of science-y nerd, i loved this comparison!joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17400736499756854621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-63568241366614154952013-04-11T05:45:13.343-07:002013-04-11T05:45:13.343-07:00first time here and loved your place :)first time here and loved your place :)Anil Sawanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09598267987035726165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-62487035507894189532013-04-10T13:15:36.814-07:002013-04-10T13:15:36.814-07:00A beautiful write, one of those outstanding poems ...A beautiful write, one of those outstanding poems I wish I could remember each and every word when I leave the page. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-67821691199623191932013-04-10T11:40:12.088-07:002013-04-10T11:40:12.088-07:00This is wonderful. It's amazing how cathartic...This is wonderful. It's amazing how cathartic poetry can be no matter how long ago the events.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-75896537429708337592013-04-10T07:57:01.455-07:002013-04-10T07:57:01.455-07:00Finding a creative release in poetry. Awesome. I r...Finding a creative release in poetry. Awesome. I really like this one.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-951977031105186312013-04-10T07:42:38.359-07:002013-04-10T07:42:38.359-07:00"laying dormant in blades of nevermind grass,..."laying dormant in blades of nevermind grass,"<br /><br />I'm not worthy. I'm not worthy.<br /><br />A wonderful marriage of seven words stands out in an exceptional poem.<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><br />Mark ButkusMark Butkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04028422696260495656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-50579340152998065702013-04-09T21:00:18.389-07:002013-04-09T21:00:18.389-07:00How therapeutic poetry can be : )How therapeutic poetry can be : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-64759395542269096672013-04-09T18:58:29.662-07:002013-04-09T18:58:29.662-07:00Yes, we do birthing them, again and again ~ Love ...Yes, we do birthing them, again and again ~ Love the snappy write Jennifer ~ Happy writing to all of us ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-9324368196534177982013-04-09T17:38:52.654-07:002013-04-09T17:38:52.654-07:00stunning! such intense description. really nicel...stunning! such intense description. really nicely done.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-81735423387507564462013-04-09T17:06:20.681-07:002013-04-09T17:06:20.681-07:00Nicely written. I think by the end of the month m...Nicely written. I think by the end of the month many of us will be breathless breathing poetry into birth. Smiles!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-300944713347032712013-04-09T15:39:24.581-07:002013-04-09T15:39:24.581-07:00so liked breathing them into life... fun readso liked breathing them into life... fun readWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-9635635645408144162013-04-09T15:29:40.742-07:002013-04-09T15:29:40.742-07:00"when every gnarly, blighted branch of life’s..."when every gnarly, blighted branch of life’s undoing<br />rotted right up through your soles"<br />"nevermind grass . . . time-smudged glass"<br />Whew! is right!!!<br />Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-681324205579287412013-04-09T13:20:45.324-07:002013-04-09T13:20:45.324-07:00Deep! Whew! The metaphors are brilliantly arrayed....Deep! Whew! The metaphors are brilliantly arrayed. I'll look for more of your work on Tuesday's.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-22751902707816315152013-04-09T13:19:40.811-07:002013-04-09T13:19:40.811-07:00beautifulbeautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-63439238284167330722013-04-09T13:19:25.597-07:002013-04-09T13:19:25.597-07:00poetry to the rescue when things go pearshaped. Lo...poetry to the rescue when things go pearshaped. Love it.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-14402780713430533812013-04-09T13:13:51.476-07:002013-04-09T13:13:51.476-07:00those pieces of poems called out,/laying dormant i...those pieces of poems called out,/laying dormant in blades of nevermind grass, ... absolutely magical line in wonderful poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-33230710285634360532013-04-09T13:03:35.829-07:002013-04-09T13:03:35.829-07:00I agree... that last line is perfection! :)
Bad ...I agree... that last line is perfection! :) <br /><br />Bad Penny Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750392266956265554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-70922291072901477232013-04-09T12:41:53.177-07:002013-04-09T12:41:53.177-07:00That last line is perfect.That last line is perfect.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com