tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post8764861582951502710..comments2024-03-14T18:03:00.898-07:00Comments on Poet Laundry: Poet's Pen StrokesJennifer Wagnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-2688468265607656172016-02-02T10:18:05.876-07:002016-02-02T10:18:05.876-07:00How well you've captured the process. I really...How well you've captured the process. I really like the beginning, the ending, and everything in between.<br /><br />janetldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17815491049216208161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-67133714927022732622016-02-01T17:00:56.825-07:002016-02-01T17:00:56.825-07:00I simply adore that blue darkness and these ending...I simply adore that blue darkness and these ending:<br /><br />needing both dark and light<br />to come<br />to be.<br /><br />Gorgeous writing Jennifer ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-17165152600689563882016-02-01T16:37:24.553-07:002016-02-01T16:37:24.553-07:00Absolutely wonderful bit of self-description. Love...Absolutely wonderful bit of self-description. Loved. Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-33311317526978546192016-01-30T18:51:03.675-07:002016-01-30T18:51:03.675-07:00One of the nicest pieces I have read lately about ...One of the nicest pieces I have read lately about the process--hope you are well!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-27847716332955702562016-01-29T19:10:27.745-07:002016-01-29T19:10:27.745-07:00the poetic process - evocatively rendered with a w...the poetic process - evocatively rendered with a wonderful affective, yet mystical quality. "the darkness spreads inky arms": a soulful, layered line of poetry. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-825392470518304042016-01-28T16:32:22.092-07:002016-01-28T16:32:22.092-07:00I love the opening "she was born with a bottl...I love the opening "she was born with a bottle of blue darkness inside her" Truly creative - I really like the imagery!Tankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10268689309747055641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-86875638435504879592016-01-28T09:49:31.066-07:002016-01-28T09:49:31.066-07:00Inky arms. Loved that image! Inky arms. Loved that image! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-51250297984783978772016-01-28T08:10:48.454-07:002016-01-28T08:10:48.454-07:00"needing both dark and light
to come
to b..."needing both dark and light <br /> to come <br /> to be"<br />__Pen marks. Your words, and in them a contrary balance that causes awareness; in dry ink, words will march. <br /><br />a scratch<br />that sound of pen on paper <br />dry ink <br /><br />_m<br /><br />Magyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-50293577169899219252016-01-28T02:17:40.255-07:002016-01-28T02:17:40.255-07:00I think the darkness needs the light to come throu...I think the darkness needs the light to come through... and light appears only in darkness.. I think that's exactly why you need poets like yourself.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-60059576660721194642016-01-27T20:56:37.827-07:002016-01-27T20:56:37.827-07:00Love it. You had me with the title! love this...
...Love it. You had me with the title! love this...<br /> <br />and exits<br />on pages<br /><br />needing both dark and light<br />to come<br />to be.<br /><br />Brilliant!Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-16518604645781893412016-01-27T18:08:03.286-07:002016-01-27T18:08:03.286-07:00Perfectly poetic - I think you may be describing y...Perfectly poetic - I think you may be describing yourself ;)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.com