tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post5624663857734800559..comments2024-03-14T18:03:00.898-07:00Comments on Poet Laundry: ThiefJennifer Wagnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-16483605046040299592013-07-15T02:34:20.337-07:002013-07-15T02:34:20.337-07:00beautiful poem of a beautiful bird. Our jays here ...beautiful poem of a beautiful bird. Our jays here in Britain are mainly pink - beautiful in their way, but Stellers really are something else. You're very lucky.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-35819672326128176562013-07-12T06:38:46.713-07:002013-07-12T06:38:46.713-07:00Jennifer, those are one of my favorite birds--woul...Jennifer, those are one of my favorite birds--would only see them when we went to the mountains--beautiful butterfly cinquain!Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-71427298839498063062013-07-11T19:57:04.880-07:002013-07-11T19:57:04.880-07:00I guess their beauty is their camouflage. Who wou...I guess their beauty is their camouflage. Who would suspect their true nature.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-44763716290465470862013-07-11T18:14:54.003-07:002013-07-11T18:14:54.003-07:00I love blue jays. We have them aplenty on the Isla...I love blue jays. We have them aplenty on the Island. But I didnt know they plundered nests. Ack!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-79252051104433711742013-07-11T10:55:24.518-07:002013-07-11T10:55:24.518-07:00What a wonderful poem, very true to nature.What a wonderful poem, very true to nature.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-77004126358940796002013-07-11T10:42:12.409-07:002013-07-11T10:42:12.409-07:00I am familiar with the steller's jay from our ...I am familiar with the steller's jay from our mountain house at Big Bear Lake in Southern California. And they are such thieves! And they are faster and more subtle than bears when we are camping! But amazingly beautiful birds as well.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-41771426949120663762013-07-11T09:57:18.638-07:002013-07-11T09:57:18.638-07:00So true! Lovely write!So true! Lovely write!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-50511374927742041762013-07-11T09:22:04.865-07:002013-07-11T09:22:04.865-07:00...ha, bird version of batman... loved it! how sad......ha, bird version of batman... loved it! how sad to think one life must end for the survival of the other... never seen such kind of bird but i think it looks cool... smiles... kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-33675482811670330482013-07-10T17:02:31.581-07:002013-07-10T17:02:31.581-07:00WELL they may be beautiful but they are might pesk...WELL they may be beautiful but they are might pesky ... I'm a little afraid of them. Lovely, lovely poetry.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-29911457061343836262013-07-10T16:40:12.997-07:002013-07-10T16:40:12.997-07:00A beautiful use of cinquain form.Well done!A beautiful use of cinquain form.Well done!rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-41795071276846033932013-07-10T15:55:15.077-07:002013-07-10T15:55:15.077-07:00The way you've threaded words that play off of...The way you've threaded words that play off of each other through this piece is outstanding:<br /><br />blue - true<br />crest - nests<br />sooty - freshly - berries<br />rob - run<br /><br />and confers a lovely, lyrical flow. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-40414835181920040942013-07-10T13:57:20.673-07:002013-07-10T13:57:20.673-07:00That's why blue jays aren't my favorites, ...That's why blue jays aren't my favorites, but they sure are beautiful (steller's jays not as much). Love your butterfly cinquain! = )Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-44858751257032790162013-07-10T12:19:30.673-07:002013-07-10T12:19:30.673-07:00good write, Jennifer - smiles ~ Mgood write, Jennifer - smiles ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-31861498634926591392013-07-10T11:59:50.591-07:002013-07-10T11:59:50.591-07:00Very well done, i love that mask almost melodramat...Very well done, i love that mask almost melodramatic. Creation is certainly interesting. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-16549566324122622822013-07-10T11:55:53.103-07:002013-07-10T11:55:53.103-07:00Ah, they do look like a bird to be reckoned with. ...Ah, they do look like a bird to be reckoned with. I like your cinquain, but feel very sorry for the birds whose nests it robs. Interesting the variety of creatures that are part of the balance of nature!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6177964686272709979.post-4588731004444775512013-07-10T10:14:56.473-07:002013-07-10T10:14:56.473-07:00one you def have to keep an eye on...interesting t...one you def have to keep an eye on...interesting that nature made them look the part as well...ha.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com